Problem: After installing Windows 10 on separate disk, Windows entry is not visible in grub menu. Windows 10 installer might not have used GPT partition table, but instead is using MBR for booting. It might still look like UEFI boot since Windows created small system partition with bit similar content as EFI partition would have.
The custom GRUB entry isn't needed (at least not for windows 10's boot manager), you can install to the BCD to your main EFI partition, with "bcdboot C:\Windows /s X: /f UEFI", where X is the letter you assigned to the UEFI partition. You can assign a letter to the UEFI partition either using the windows gui or using "diskpart" command line utility. This works even if windows isn't in a GPT partition
Boot to Windows, start cmd as Administrator and run
> diskpart
DISKPART> list volume
DISKPART> select volume 3
DISKPART> assign letter=X
Install UEFI files on EFI partition on Linux hard disk
bcdboot C:\Windows /s X: /f UEFI
> diskpart
DISKPART> select volume 3
DISKPART> remove letter=X
Boot into Linux and run
sudo update-grub
Now grub menu should have entry for Windows.