- State “DONE” from “TODO” [2018-09-18 Tue 12:30]
- State “TODO” from [2018-09-18 Tue 11:15]
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I haven’t checked any of these with the exception of capitalized terms.
Also, replace “dissatisfactoriness” with “dissatisfaction” unless it has a particular meaning. I don’t know the context of the described event nor the community in which it took place. Where I come from, when we speak politely, we call assuming the good will of others ”Pollyannaism.” Doing so might have been correct and reasonable given the circumstances, but the text doesn’t make it obvious one way or the other. The claim made by the topic sentence gets little support from the remainder of the paragraph. How would one incorporate the feedback after “turning down the volume” so to speak? Again possibly clear to most readers, but not easily understood by all. And all of sudden you discuss breathing exercise and its daily practice. The paragraph’s fifth sentences states a similarity and returns to the main idea, mindful review. Did you mean to prod the reader with a quick digression? What’s “mindful review?” And it won’t get defined for three more paragraphs. Why did you assume some mental difficulty lay at fault? I understand that one can control one’s reactions, but if so, you seem to have leaped to the conclusion. Was this an elision of intermediate steps for brevity’s sake? Make use how? Again, possibly obvious to most readers. Would most readers already know this material?youtube-dl https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czLrzIkbNIw https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGi2URuBRz4