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The Turing School strives to create an inclusive, helpful and creative community.

Being immersed in this has instilled in me an instinct to strive for not only person growth, but those around me. Throughout multiple team projects, I have been able to provide growth to the team through knowledge sharing, pair programming, patience and openness. I have seen the first-hand results of success through this approach and am excited to bring this mindset to a professional career.

Although, I recognize the importance of a team in solving problems, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to be self-driven and curious. This can be exemplified by my ability to learn quickly. Within a demanding curriculum, I was able to create projects using techniques/tools/stacks that were not covered. These include a Java desktop game and an Elm microservice. At every opportunity I’ve been driven to learn more, ideate and execute with zero bias.

While learning, I had never stopped sharing. For example, I had held a session on learning Elm, and organized a hackathon team surrounded by it. I haven’t let my knowledge just be my knowledge. I am constantly excited to share, receive feedback and iterate.

Outside of programming, I am consistently infatuated by design and the design process. Overall, my pursuit of self-iteration is inspired by it! I love exploring new concepts -- currently I am very into typography and its complexity.

Overall, I reach out to Etsy today, as I feel that you share a lot of these views. Etsy’s inherent creativeness and it ability to foster it as a business model is extremely impressive. A company that is focused on personal growth is one that I’d feel I belong at.

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I think this is a good starting point, but it feels like raw material that needs to be refined. I usually structure my cover letters in the following way:

  • Where I've been (education, experience) [1 paragraph]
  • Where I'm at (why you're looking for work, what you're looking for) [1 paragraph]
  • Where I'm going (why Etsy is the place for you to work so you can get there, what you can offer Etsy) [2 paragraphs]

In general, a desire to learn is great and something everyone wants to hear but don't overemphasize it. Explain that learning is important but producing is equally as important. Make them understand that you don't see Etsy as graduate school, but as a place to produce and to apply the things you have learned, while also learning more along the way.

Some areas are also not clear. For example, "zero bias" isn't a reality and it also isn't necessarily a positive. We should have opinions on the tools we use and use those to inform what tools we use next and why/why not. This is a mark of a good developer, I would say. Also, curiosity and being self-driven are not exemplified by the ability to learn quickly. They're different traits entirely.

I think you do a great job of being confident, though. That's key. I also like that you included some interests outside of programming.

I would organize things a little bit and have some other students and maybe Meeka take a look at it and then send it back. Nice work so far, though! 👍

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Jbern16 commented Jul 28, 2016

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As a graduate of the Turing School of Software and Design, I have developed a strong ability to work alongside a community of driven, diverse and talented programmers. Throughout multiple team projects, I have been able to provide growth to the team through knowledge sharing, pair programming, patience and openness. I have seen the first-hand results of success through this approach and am excited to bring this mindset to a professional career.

Right now, I am looking to engage in a professional position that will allow me to learn, share and produce code that is not only functional, but well designed. Although I recognize the importance of a team in solving problems, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to be self-driven and curious. Within a demanding curriculum, I was able to create projects using techniques/tools/stacks that were not covered. These include a Java desktop game and an Elm microservice. At every opportunity I’ve been driven to learn more, ideate and execute. I find a position that will reward ideation one that I will excel at!

I reach out to Etsy today, as I feel that these tenets align with you. Etsy’s inherent creativeness and it ability to foster it as a business model is extremely impressive. I believe I can bring forth talent, eagerness to contribute, as well as learn, and a creative, curious mindset. Just like the thousands of artists that Etsy works with everyday, I believe I can be an an asset that also is grateful, respectful and trustworthy .

Apart from programming, I am consistently infatuated by design and the design process. Overall, my pursuit of self-iteration is inspired by it! I love exploring new concepts -- currently I am very into typography and its complexity. Much like the customers that make Etsy a success, I love exploration outside of just "what I do" from 9-5.

Overall, for the aforementioned reasons, I feel as if Etsy would be great fit and a place that I can hit the ground running. I hope I can prove it soon.

Best,

Jon

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Jbern16 commented Jul 30, 2016

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To Whom It May Concern:

In my experience programming and as a brand marketer, I have developed a strong ability to work in communities centered around drive, inclusiveness and diversity. Throughout multiple team projects at the Turing School of Software and Design and my current project for Mode Set, I have been able to provide growth to teams through knowledge sharing, pair programming, patience and openness. I have seen the first-hand results of success through this approach and I am excited to bring this mindset to a professional career at Etsy.

Like the blog's namesake, I believe code is craft. A craft that is fun, endlessly interesting and always thought provoking. I would bring forth to Etsy an eagerness to contribute and a creative, curious mindset. I have demonstrated this through consistent side-projects. A personal site written in Elm, just because I thought it would be fun, an algorithms repository to practice and understand what goes on behind the scenes. Challenge is fun, and bringing to life ideas is exhilarating!

Right now, I am looking to engage in a position that will allow me to learn, share and produce code that is not only functional, but well designed and driven by data. Although I recognize the importance of a team in solving problems, I have consistently demonstrated my ability to be self-driven and curious. Within a demanding curriculum, I was able to create projects using techniques/tools/stacks that were not covered. These include a Java desktop game and an Elm microservice. At every opportunity I’ve been driven to learn more, ideate and execute. I find a position that will reward ideation one that I will excel at!

Apart from programming, I am consistently infatuated by design and the design process. Overall, my pursuit of self-iteration is inspired by it! I love exploring new concepts -- currently I am very into typography and its complexity. Much like the customers that make Etsy a success, I love exploration outside of just "what I do" from 9-5.

Overall, I hope that you feel that I can be an interesting and unique candidate. I am excited to share more with you!

Best,

Jon

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