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MarkBaker/Moneo

Created Mar 22, 2019
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What would you like to do?
Home Page
Today’s tech, tomorrow’s mindset, yesterday’s problems. => Todays tech, tomorrows mindset, yesterdays problems.
(no apostrophes)
You ideate, validate and prototype. => You bring the ideas,
Unsure exactly what you're saying here
on fluffy clouds
??? in the cloud?
Company
Our Story
client we were lucky to have the chance to work with. => clients we were fortunate to have the opportunity to work with.
(plural)
"fortunate" is better than "lucky"
And "opportunity" would be better than "chance"
What We Do
We help successfull businesses to initiate, escalate their game and launch business they created with great effort. => We help successful businesses to initiate, escalate their game and launch business they created to great effort.
Spelling of successful; __to__ great effort
How We Do => How We Do It
We extend our expertise for long-lasting infrastructural development => We use our expertise for long-lasting infrastructural development
"use" rather than "extend"
make sure it stable => make sure it is stable
Missing verb
Services
ABOUT SERVICE => ABOUT THE SERVICE or ABOUT OUR SERVICE
Back-End Development
Your business deserves to be handled nothing less than perfect. => Your business deserves to be handled nothing less than perfectly.
Perfectly rather than Perfect
Front-End Development
Either it is the product or the business itself => Whether it is the product or the business itself
DevOps
services that operate seamlessly at high velocity. => services that operate seamlessly at high speed.
speed would probably be better than velocity
Extended Team
different organizations varies from conglomerates to start-ups. => different organizations from conglomerates to start-ups.
Drop the word varies, or use "ranging from"
Over the years, we worked as remote workers, freelancers, in-housers and contractors. => Over the years, we have worked as remote workers, freelancers, in-housers and contractors.
"have worked" rather than simply "worked"
Managed Products
Moneo is here to make it up-and-running flawlessly => Moneo is here to get it up-and-running flawlessly
"get" rather than "make"
Technologies
The product or the business; either of the shines at first sight.
"these", perhaps rather than "the"; but unclear of the meaning of this
Software Craftmanship with Style
one reliable, clean and updateable clean code. => one reliable, and maintainable clean codebase.
Repetition of "clean"
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