Corrections to Underwater–FFF’s Saki: Zenkoku-hen (default track)

[Underwater-FFF] Saki Zenkoku-hen - The Nationals - 04 [BD][1080p-FLAC][8DD8F1C9].diff

--- a/[Underwater-FFF] Saki Zenkoku-hen - The Nationals - 04 [BD][1080p-FLAC][8DD8F1C9].ass
+++ b/[Underwater-FFF] Saki Zenkoku-hen - The Nationals - 04 [BD][1080p-FLAC][8DD8F1C9].ass
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@
 Dialogue: 3,0:10:32.02,0:10:33.68,BoxText,,0,0,0,,{\fs28\fad(150,0)\fsp-1.3\blur0.4\pos(1036.864,212.955)}East \NHand 1\N-\NBonus 3
 Dialogue: 1,0:10:32.02,0:10:33.68,BoxWhite,,0,0,0,,{\fad(150,0)\blur0.5\fscx260\fscy450\p1\c&HFFFDFB&\pos(987.083,130.531)}m 0 0 l 0 38 38 38 38 0
 Dialogue: 9,0:10:35.90,0:10:39.58,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I guess even {\i0}she{\i1} doesn't get \Nconsecutive double riichis.
-Dialogue: 9,0:10:46.54,0:10:48.84,Default,,0,0,0,,{\an8\i1}My hand stopped building at a point
+Dialogue: 9,0:10:46.54,0:10:48.84,Default,,0,0,0,,{\an8\i1}My hand stopped{ building}{isn't she talking about her physical hand? like... the end of her arm} at a point
 Dialogue: 9,0:10:48.84,0:10:50.40,Default,,0,0,0,,{\an8\alpha&HFF&\fscx60}...{\r}{\i1}where I would normally never hesitate...
 Dialogue: 9,0:10:50.40,0:10:52.56,Default,,0,0,0,,{\an8\i1}Discarding the five of characters
 Dialogue: 9,0:10:52.56,0:10:55.16,Default,,0,0,0,,{\an8\i1}would leave me with the most \Npossible ways to get into tenpai.
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
 Dialogue: 9,0:14:42.22,0:14:45.80,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I thought Eisui's player \Nwas gonna get serious.
 Dialogue: 9,0:14:49.83,0:14:54.66,Default,,0,0,0,,Wow, it looks like the princess \Nis completely awake now.
 Dialogue: 9,0:14:54.66,0:14:56.82,Default,,0,0,0,,She woke up early this time.
-Dialogue: 9,0:14:56.82,0:15:00.76,Default,,0,0,0,,Once Komaki is awake, \Nshe works really hard.
+Dialogue: 9,0:14:56.82,0:15:00.76,Default,,0,0,0,,Once Komaki is awake, \Nshe is a regular hard worker.
 Dialogue: 9,0:15:00.76,0:15:02.68,Default,,0,0,0,,I feel like this is the first time
 Dialogue: 9,0:15:02.68,0:15:06.50,Default,,0,0,0,,she's woken up this early \Nin a match that wasn't against us.
 Dialogue: 9,0:15:06.50,0:15:08.22,Default,,0,0,0,,Doesn't look like she's going \Nto fall back asleep, either.
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
 Dialogue: 9,0:19:52.71,0:19:54.62,Default,,0,0,0,,The more Kosegawa Shiromi hesitates,
 Dialogue: 9,0:19:54.62,0:19:56.99,Default,,0,0,0,,the more expensive her hand gets.
 Dialogue: 9,0:19:56.99,0:19:57.75,Default,,0,0,0,,{\alpha&HFF&\fscx60}...{\r}Almost like...
-Dialogue: 9,0:19:58.19,0:20:01.26,Default,,0,0,0,,...the ancient folk tale {\alpha&HFF&\fscx80}...{\r}\Nfrom the Touno region.
+Dialogue: 9,0:19:58.19,0:20:01.26,Default,,0,0,0,,...the ancient folk tale{\alpha&HFF&\fscx80}...{\r}\Nfrom the Touno region.
 Dialogue: 9,0:20:01.71,0:20:05.51,Default,,0,0,0,,The legendary house that \N{\alpha&HFF&\fscx60}...{\r}bestows riches upon all who visit it...
 Dialogue: 9,0:20:06.77,0:20:08.10,Default,,0,0,0,,Mayoiga, "house of the lost".
 Dialogue: 9,0:20:14.13,0:20:15.75,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Finally.