Derpy and The Hunting of the super tasty Muffin - spelling mistakes

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• There are pleny of stalls selling goods like vegetables ...

  I think you mean plenty here. I think it would also make it more readable if you put a comma after goods

  There are plenty of stalls selling goods, like vegetables ...

• It's kind of hypnotizing how the drops splashing at the water's surface.

  I think you are missing an "are" here. It would make more sense like this:

  It's kind of hypnotizing how the drops are splashing at the water's surface.

• Everywhere are shelfs filled with knowledge ...

  The plural form of shell is shelves.

  Everywhere are shelves filled with knowledge ...

• One of the bookend holds a very big, brown book with magical runes on it's board.

  1. You are missing an s from bookends.

  2. It should be its instead of it's.

     • It's a trap!
     • Behold its power!

  3. I think you mean cover instead of board.

• Stairs are going up the 2nd floor with even more books ...

  This doesn't sound very natural. I think it would sound better like this:

  Stairs are leading up to the 2nd floor, with even more books ...

• Twilight Sparkle stands in front of a shelf and goes through the books very meticulous

  Twilight Sparkle is standing in front of a shelf, going through the books very meticulously

• ... and even books you got no idea what they are about.

  I think have is a more proper word here.

  ... and even books you have no idea what they are about.

• Some loose pieces of paper stick between a few of them.

  This sentence doesn't make much sense like this. How about:

  Some loose pieces of paper are stuck between a few of them.

• A Quill lies on a row of books ... Why are you capitalizing Quill?

  A quill lies on a row of books ...

• It's really big and the runes on it's board are glowing ...

  Again, you should probably use cover instead of board here. Also a comma after big wouldn't hurt. You should also use its instead of it's.

  It's really big, and the runes on its cover are glowing ...

• You've eaten a firefly sometime.

  How about:

  You've eaten a firefly sometime ago.

• They are looking more then ivy growing on the paper.

  They look more than just ivy growing on the paper.

• 1) Yeah... what is this place?

  1. Yeah... What is this place?

• 2) Lyra gave me that book. And I should give it to you.

  That book? No book was mentioned in the conversation. I think it would be better like this:

  Lyra gave me a book, and told me I should give it to you.

• 3) Had to go, bye

  Had? Why is it in past tense? Don't you mean:

  Have to go, bye!

  I think this is even better:

  Gotta go, bye!

• Oh wonderfull.

  I think you mean wonderful.

  Oh, wonderful!

• Maybe you could put it back into the shelf, please?

  I think on would be a more proper word here.

  Maybe you could put it back on the shelf, please?

• Twilight wants you to put back the book you got from Lyra into the right shelf.

  Again, I think you should use on.

  Twilight wants you to put back the book you got from Lyra on the right shelf.

• But which IS the right one?

  I think the emphasis should be on which.

  But WHICH is the right one?

• There are three rows in this shelf.

  I think this would be better phrased:

  This shelf has three rows.

• You put the book into the shelf

  You put the book on the shelf

• Your eyes begin to gleam and spit leaks out of your mouth corner ...

  spit is not a really pretty word. I think drool would fit better in this context.

  Your eyes begin to gleam and drool leaks out from the corner of your mouth ...

• ... as you see this fantastic piece of tastyness ...

  ... as you see this fantastic piece of tastiness ...

• 2) What about this odd ingredients?

  What about these odd ingredients?

• 1) Right, this guys!

  1. Right, those guys (gals?)!

• You know how to read a map, didn't you?

  You know how to read a map, don't you?

• Just look at the map and visit this places.

  Just look at the map and visit these places.

• When you got all the ingredients come back here.

  I think a comma after ingredients would do good.

  When you got all the ingredients, come back here!

• In the meantime I try to find out what this special ingredient could be.

  Again, a comma after meantime would make it more readable. Also, It should be I'll try

  In the meantime, I'll try to find out what this special ingredient could be.

• You're the most beautiful pony in town. You were that before, of cause ;)

  You're the most beautiful pony in town. You were that before, of course ;)

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