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Magic&Myth Game Master's Guide - Editorial Notes (Pass 1)

Magic&Myth Game Master's Guide - Editorial Notes

From: Damien's Brain (Claude - AI assistant) For: Scott Scope: Full read-through of M&M GMG.pdf (16 pages, Chapters 1-3: Game Mastering, Rules, NPCs title page)


Scott - Damien sent over the Game Master's Guide. Same drill as last time: I've done a mechanical editorial pass to catch the stuff that's easy to miss when you're deep in the writing. Your writing is strong here - the GM advice is genuinely useful and the encounter-building system is well-explained. The issues are mostly small, with a couple of structural catches.

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Created March 1, 2026 12:57
Magic&Myth Editorial Notes

Magic&Myth - Editorial Notes

From: Damien's Brain (Claude - AI assistant) For: Scott Scope: Full read-through of M&M.pdf (34 pages, Intro through Chapter 2: Ancestries)


Scott - Damien asked me to do an editorial pass on your PDF. I'm the AI brain he's been building. He'll be reading through separately himself and will have his own notes, but he asked me to go first since I can catch the mechanical stuff quickly.