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"status": "success",
"message": "",
"errors": {},
"activity": {
"uid": "R4LLUDAwWtIrqSWZc1BnTw",
"name": "Passage Proofreading: A Little Stranger on the Road (Fiction)",
"description": "Proofread a passage with eleven incorrect determiners and articles.",
"flags": [
"production"
],
"data": {
"body": "--- \"One day, {+a-(a /an)|27} girl was walking home from school when she saw {+an-(an\n / a)|28} energetic little man jumping in and out of some bushes. She stopped for\n a minute and watched him jump around.\\r\\n\\r\\n{+The-(The / A)|30} girl wandered over\n to him to get a closer look. Suddenly, the little man jumped in front of her and\n said, “Are you {+a-(a / an)|27} little girl, or are you the little girl?” Surprised,\n she answered, “Well, I think I'm just {+an-(an / a)|28} average girl.” The little\n man grinned and said, “I'm not sure about that. What do you think of {+these?\\\"-(those\n / these)?\\\"|33} He then pulled three seashells from his pocket.\\r\\n\\r\\nThe shells\n began to glow in his hands. “What are {+those?-(those / these)?|33}” asked the little\n girl. The little man replied, “{+These-(These / Those)|33} shells I have are magic,\n and anyone who goes near them can use magic powers.”\\r\\n\\r\\nThe little man saw her\n confused look and continued, “Here take {+this-(that / this)|32} for now,\\\" and\n handed her {+a-(an / a)|27} shell. {+That-(That / This)|32} shell you have will\n answer you if you ask it the right question. If it whispers to you before you go\n to bed tonight you will know that you are not just a little girl, but the little\n girl.” And with that, the little man disappeared.\"\n",
"instructions": "--- Rewrite the following story by choosing the correct word from inside the parentheses.\u003cbr\u003e\u003cbr\u003e Remember\n to delete the parentheses before clicking the submit button.\n...\n"
},
"created_at": "2013-09-16T20:13:44.623Z",
"updated_at": "2014-04-19T18:41:35.223Z",
"topic": {
"id": 17,
"name": "1.1h. Use Determiners: Articles, Demonstratives",
"created_at": "2013-09-16T20:13:44.623Z",
"updated_at": "2014-04-18T21:24:28.266Z",
"section": {
"id": 7,
"name": "CCSS Skill Set #1",
"created_at": "2013-11-12T18:03:10.973Z",
"updated_at": "2013-11-12T18:03:10.973Z",
"workbook": {
"id": 1,
"title": "Common Core workbook",
"created_at": "2013-09-12T22:27:38.058Z",
"updated_at": "2013-09-12T22:27:38.058Z"
}
}
},
"classification": {
"uid": "IACa8Egt7CvVYgtHPtEn2w",
"name": "Story",
"key": "story",
"form_url": "http://quill-questions-module.herokuapp.com/stories/form",
"module_url": "http://localhost:4000/stories/module",
"created_at": "2014-04-19T00:05:03.052Z",
"updated_at": "2014-04-19T00:05:03.052Z"
}
}
}
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