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Peer review of Analysis of Standalone Mobile Gaze Tracking Methodology
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Proposal Review

By Ian Dunn

Topic

Analysis of Standalone Mobile Gaze Tracking Methodology

Nick Clarke

Review

Title

Clear and concise. Detailed enough to provide insight into the paper topic without getting confusing.

Abstract

Generally good. Not clear what a standalone device is? Perhaps an explanatory sentance.

Outline

Good breakdown of points. Maybe a few could use elaboration - what is the problem statement, for example?

Bibliography

Looks good, lots of sources that appear relevant.

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