http://web.ece.ucdavis.edu/~jowens/commonerrors.html
https://www.lightbluetouchpaper.org/2007/03/14/how-not-to-write-an-abstract/
we have certainly not written the abstract last - because the paper hasn't been written yet! - but other than that somewhat loopy confusion of cause and effect, there's good advice in there.
http://psychology.yale.edu/sites/default/files/gopenswan_onsciencewriting.pdf
very old paper, still cracks me up like the first time I read it, and still I fall into the mistakes the authors outline
Strunk's master piece - a book now I then I revisit Prof. Strunk aphorisms'
I remember this one quite fondly, even if the discipline covered (Psychology) is somewhat removed from what we do. Of specific interest is Chapter 6, drawing the applicable analogies to the kind of methods and templates we use.
Note that (technical) writing is a skill that we never end learning - every paper you produce teaches you new stuff about writing.