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A few complex sentences that you can refactor
1. Attempts were made on the part of the President’s aides to assert his immunity from a Congressional subpoena.
2. The author’s analysis of our data omits any citation of sources that would provide support for his criticism of our argument.
3. The agreement by the participants on the program was based on the assumption that there was a promise of federal funds.
4. The board’s rejection of our proposal was a disappointment but not a surprise because of our expectation that a decision had already been made in regard to a delay of any new initiatives.
5. Once deeply understood, the process of true transformation reveals a capability of blending an organization‘s own genetic code with agile DNA, thus allowing for the evolution of a new species of organization. Further learning can be stimulated through the use of external coaching to reach the levels of self-awareness required in an organization to achieve higher levels of efficiency and innovation.
6. Further learning can be stimulated through the use of external coaching to reach the levels of self-awareness required in an organization to achieve higher levels of efficiency and innovation.
7. After a careful revision of your reasoning for why you think you should be exempt from city ordinance 114b requiring sprinkler systems in multi-unit, high-rise dwellings, your request was denied as a matter of public safety. An appeal to this decision can be made by sending a letter to I. B. Fare of the zoning commission.
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