Interdiff between unreleased_dist_v1 and unreleased_dist_v2

v1v2.diff

$ git diff unreleased_dist_v1 unreleased_dist_v2
diff --git a/release.md b/release.md
index a9570c1..a73754b 100644
--- a/release.md
+++ b/release.md
@@ -35,7 +35,8 @@ and the [design goals of this policy](mirrors).
 
 Generically, a release is anything that is published beyond the group
 that owns it.  For an Apache project, that means any publication outside the
-developer community, approximated as the subscribers to a product dev list.
+developer community, defined as individuals actively participating in
+development or following the dev list.
 
 More narrowly, an official Apache release is one which has been endorsed as an
 "act of the Foundation" by a PMC.
@@ -66,8 +67,8 @@ packages are made available to the developer community for testing
 purposes. **Projects MUST direct outsiders towards official releases rather
 than raw source repositories, nightly builds, snapshots, release
 candidates, or any other similar packages.** The only people who are
-supposed to know about such developer resources are the people following the dev list
-(or searching its archives) and thus aware of the conditions placed on
+supposed to know about such developer resources are individuals actively
+engaged in or following development and thus aware of the conditions placed on
 unreleased materials.
 
 ## Artifacts ## {#artifacts}