高昌, 侯旭, 蠢货第一次修改

gistfile1.txt

To 侯:
我把
And we present a system that's capable of
integrating transfer function design results
from a group of experts to facilitate the
design process of novice users by providing
useful interactions that enable flexible
navigation in the transfer function feature
space and effective visual suggestion.

改成:
And we present a system that's capable of
integrating transfer function design results
from a group of experts to facilitate the
design process of novice users by providing
flexible navigation and effective visual
suggestion.

感觉这句话结构还是很简单的:
    系统的功能: integrate transfer function results
to facilitate design process
    手段: by providing interaction and suggestion

长和难懂的原因是修饰词太多, 我把一些修饰词去掉,
这样感觉应该好多了. 这句话是摘抄之前一篇论文里面的
原句是我导师写的, 更长, 更难懂. 本身
一个非常简单的东西, 被他说的异常神秘.

To Hou:
Because of my (excellent) performance in
the project, I set up my reputation in the
team ...
我原句是加了excellent的, 后来删掉了. 感觉有点自吹自擂...

To 高 and 蠢货
at the PKUVIS Group.. 这里用at也是可以的.
software engineering technique(s) 均可
present(ed) a system ...  均可
My experience at PKUVIS is formative. at 和 is 应该是可以的
skill(s): 这个我也不太确定了.
I rewrote the crawler in JavaScript, which is(was) appropriate for the I/O
bound : 我觉得这里应该用现在时, 因为是描述Javascript的一个永久的性质.
Join / Join in: 我看网上直接用Join的比较多. Join in 感觉不能带名词?