- "many-tentacled leviathan" - again, debate around the overall tone.
- Too Lovecraftian? I agree this is too colourful but I'm actually struggling to write this sentence in neutral language without it reading so watered down as to feel like boilerplate, but that's a problem with the entire document, I suppose. Suggestions very welcome.
- "When considering alternatives, there are no contenders." - obvious/direct contenders?