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earayu commented Feb 19, 2024

I was not allergic to my cat in the first 4 years.
But one day, suddenly, I started to feel itchy in my nose and started sneezying.
Sometimes, the synptoms may become even more severe and I can be tearing up.

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  • "allergic to my cat" 可以改为 "allergic to cats"
  • "sneezying" 应该是 "sneezing"
  • "synptoms" 应该是 "symptoms"
  • "tearing up" 可以使用更具体的表达方式

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I was not allergic to cats for the first 4 years. However, one day, out of the blue, I started experiencing itchiness in my nose and began sneezing. Sometimes, the symptoms can become even more severe, and I may find myself tearing up.

更好的表达方式

For the first four years, I had no allergies to cats. But one day, all of a sudden, I began feeling itchiness in my nose and started sneezing. Occasionally, the symptoms can worsen, and I may even experience excessive tearing.

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