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Today I had an English interview for QuestDB. I am comfortable with reading English articles, listening people speaking english.
But it's not easy for me to express, especially talking.
The interview is a disaster, I think I made tons of grammar mistakes, failing to express my ideas. So it ends quickly.

问题

1. "people speaking english"应改为"people speaking English"。
2. "But it's not easy for me to express, especially talking"应改为"But it's not easy for me to express myself, especially when speaking".
3. "So it ends quickly"应改为"So it ended quickly"。

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改进

Today I had an English interview for QuestDB. I am comfortable with reading English articles and listening to people speaking English. However, it's not easy for me to express myself, especially when speaking. The interview was a disaster. I think I made tons of grammar mistakes and failed to express my ideas. As a result, it ended quickly.

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更好的表达方式

Today I had an English interview for QuestDB. I feel confident in my ability to read English articles and understand spoken English. However, expressing myself, especially in conversation, is challenging for me. Unfortunately, the interview did not go well. I believe I made numerous grammar mistakes and struggled to articulate my ideas effectively, resulting in a quick conclusion.

At the begining of 2023, I quitted the job that I've been working for 5 years and left the city that I've been living for 6 years.

问题

1. "quitted"应改为"quit"。
2. "that I've been working for 5 years"应改为"where I had been working for 5 years"。
3. "that I've been living for 6 years"应改为"where I had been living for 6 years"。

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改进

At the beginning of 2023, I quit the job where I had been working for 5 years and left the city where I had been living for 6 years.

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更好的表达方式

In early 2023, I decided to leave my job after working there for 5 years and move away from the city I had called home for 6 years.

I didn't realize that it has almost been 2 years since I've been together with my girlfriend.

问题

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改进

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更好的表达方式

I didn't realize that it has almost been 2 years since I've been together with my girlfriend.

Last week, I and my girlfriend went to wuzheng, which is a ancient town with thousands years of history.
The ticket costs 150 yuan, which is ratherly expensive, but we did visited another town called puyuan, which has the same lastname with my girlfriend.

问题

1. "ratherly"应改为"quite"。
2. "did visited"应改为"did visit"。
3. "has the same lastname with my girlfriend"应改为"shares the same last name as my girlfriend"。

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改进

Last week, my girlfriend and I went to Wuzheng, an ancient town with thousands of years of history. The ticket cost 150 yuan, which was quite expensive. However, we also visited another town called Puyuan, which shares the same last name as my girlfriend.

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更好的表达方式

Last week, my girlfriend and I visited Wuzheng, an ancient town with a history spanning thousands of years. Although the ticket cost 150 yuan, which was quite expensive, we also explored another town called Puyuan, which happens to share the same last name as my girlfriend.

I still remember when I took my cat to home from hangzhou last year, he was cautious and dare not to leave me.
When I was working in front of the desk, he would just lie near me on the desk.

问题

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改进

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更好的表达方式

I still remember when I brought my cat home from Hangzhou last year. He was very cautious and didn't dare to leave my side. Whenever I was working at my desk, he would simply lie down nearby.

I was not allergic to my cat in the first 4 years.
But one day, suddenly, I started to feel itchy in my nose and started sneezying.
Sometimes, the synptoms may become even more severe and I can be tearing up.

问题

• "allergic to my cat" 可以改为 "allergic to cats"
• "sneezying" 应该是 "sneezing"
• "synptoms" 应该是 "symptoms"
• "tearing up" 可以使用更具体的表达方式

改进

I was not allergic to cats for the first 4 years. However, one day, out of the blue, I started experiencing itchiness in my nose and began sneezing. Sometimes, the symptoms can become even more severe, and I may find myself tearing up.

更好的表达方式

For the first four years, I had no allergies to cats. But one day, all of a sudden, I began feeling itchiness in my nose and started sneezing. Occasionally, the symptoms can worsen, and I may even experience excessive tearing.