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I still remember when I took my cat to home from hangzhou last year, he was cautious and dare not to leave me.
When I was working in front of the desk, he would just lie near me on the desk.

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更好的表达方式

I still remember when I brought my cat home from Hangzhou last year. He was very cautious and didn't dare to leave my side. Whenever I was working at my desk, he would simply lie down nearby.

I was not allergic to my cat in the first 4 years.
But one day, suddenly, I started to feel itchy in my nose and started sneezying.
Sometimes, the synptoms may become even more severe and I can be tearing up.

问题

• "allergic to my cat" 可以改为 "allergic to cats"
• "sneezying" 应该是 "sneezing"
• "synptoms" 应该是 "symptoms"
• "tearing up" 可以使用更具体的表达方式

改进

I was not allergic to cats for the first 4 years. However, one day, out of the blue, I started experiencing itchiness in my nose and began sneezing. Sometimes, the symptoms can become even more severe, and I may find myself tearing up.

更好的表达方式

For the first four years, I had no allergies to cats. But one day, all of a sudden, I began feeling itchiness in my nose and started sneezing. Occasionally, the symptoms can worsen, and I may even experience excessive tearing.