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Registered in England № 10455912, 60 Gray’s Inn Road, Unit G1, London, England, WC1X 8AQ. Homelyfe is a trading name of AG Lyfe Ltd (FCA Registration 775185), which is an appointed representative of Vibe MGA Management Ltd (FCA Registration 770419), which is authorised and regulated by the Financial Conduct Authority. |
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tobystokes
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Aug 23, 2017
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- "No" to "№" - typographic nicety
- ' to ’ - typographic nicety
- "AG Lyfe Ltd. AG Lyfe Ltd is..." to "AG Lyfe Ltd , which is..." - continue the reference to the company in a clause rather than start a new sentence.
- "Limited" to "Ltd" - keep consistency with previous abbreviation.
- "who" to "which" - it refers to an organisation, not a person.
- clarify who that other FCA number belongs to.
- appointed representative - not a proper noun.
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